
My rating: 3 of 5 stars
I wasn't sure how many stars to give this book, three or four, but after reading about the author and his account of creating the story, settled on joining 130,000 people on GR.
The idea to wind a story around a collection of vintage pictures is interesting and fresh. And at first I really liked the book, like the first third, before anything 'supernatural' started to happen. After that point, (view spoiler) , I had a distinct impression that it was written by another person. The first part is light, but gripping, while after that the writing abruptly becomes sloppy and boring. The world-building is limping; the author goes to great length explaining how this peculiar world works, but there are so, so many details that don't fit, it's amazing.
The author also didn't bother to do his homework. I can't be sure, as a non-native English speaker, but there are several slips, when supposedly European kids from the WW I time use words, such as skivvies, marked as Americanisms in dictionaries. The stunning display of flashlight fish the kids see also doesn't quite make sense. It struck me as odd, so I went to Wikipedia of course and looked up species that are called 'flashlight fish'. Naturally, most of them are deep-water fish that don't live in the Atlantic. There are two that can be found in the Atlantic, but one of them is deep-water dweller and the other is 'epipelagic to mesopelagic', which translates to 90-820 meters, that besides comes to 'shallower depths during daylight' (the scene happens at night). A bit deep for snorkeling, isn't it? Also, the author presumably thinks that human eyes consist of whites and pupils, nothing else.
The thing that bothers me most is the unique peculiar gift of the main character to see something that appeared in the universe a hundred years ago. Did those 'special' peculiars passed as 'normals' before that? How many other peculiars live with a gift not yet called upon?
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